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(banner montain)

On every each night,we want to protest

Under the symbols of flashing flags

WE live under a mountain of banners

Everybody is criticize the flaw great man

REturn to our home,we ask for comforts

But everybody is feeling bad

IN each every morning, i keep on crying

Wondering what should we can really do

We live under a rule of no freedom

And there has no sense of liberty

WE groan under tyrants

How we stand up

Everybody is a flighter and a good duller

Our blood is bleeding for their bullet

So how can they washing his hands

On each instance we are creatures

We need love tenderly

We live in hong kong but we care china

We are people of a wonderfull nation
 


Posts: 0 | Posted: 07:04 AM on January 3, 2003 | IP
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A good artist and poet can communicate with a wide audience.

Here is an equalivant poem for you:

Get your guns boys and follow MEEE!  
Were going to have a lynching
of some tyrants in China.


 


Posts: 0 | Posted: 6:27 PM on January 21, 2003 | IP
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I know my poem is rhyme free and has no obey the rules and techniqe of meter and metric feets.However i have tried my best to express my thinkings

****Laplace181***
 


Posts: 0 | Posted: 11:45 PM on January 23, 2003 | IP
    
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